Trixie MYM Set

If you are familiar with Make Your Move, feel free to skip this next explanatory sentence. If not, Make Your Move is a contest on Smashboards in which we make Super Smash Bro movesets for practically any character we want.

That being established, I've made a moveset for the GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie! If anypony's willing to look it over and give honest critiquing, I would appreciate it. (I can't be the only person here to like both ponies and SSB... right?)

EDIT: Um... hold on. Google Docs is being stubborn and isn't letting me get the file, so... hold your horses, I guess.

I'll look at it...

Xel Unknown wrote:I'll look at it...

Thanks!

Just... give me time to wrestle Google Docs into giving me the document (probably shoulda done that before making the thread, come to think).

The Warrior of Many Faces wrote:

Thanks!

Just... give me time to wrestle Google Docs into giving me the document (probably shoulda done that before making the thread, come to think).

Yeah that would've been a bit smart...

Ah, here we go!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_avGfOnSFJTrCTBRQAbSZD1PprEWj9yYCIbRzbWs3M/edit

Well I had no idea what I was info but it was regardless a fun read. Thank you for sharing. :3 Now I wonder where the Twilight Sparkle one is...

Xel Unknown wrote:Well I had no idea what I was info but it was regardless a fun read. Thank you for sharing. :3 Now I wonder where the Twilight Sparkle one is...

I take it that I did a fairly good job, then?

Actually, sets have been made for the Mane Six, Zecora, Octavia, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and Garble at the very least, and someone's planning on doing Nightmare Moon in the near future. I can't seem to find Zecora or the CMC, though, sadly.

Twilight Sparkle: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323812&postcount=858 A fairly good set.
Rainbow Dash: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323833&postcount=859 Very well done.
Applejack: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323835&postcount=860 Okay, I guess.
Pinkie Pie: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323836&postcount=861 Excellent!
Fluttershy: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323837&postcount=862 Meh, wasn't impressed.
Rarity: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13323843&postcount=863 I'm only including this for the sake of completeness; it's not very good at all.

Octavia: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=13564037&postcount=196 A fairly interesting read.
Garble: http://www.smashboards.com/showpost.php?p=14756470&postcount=13 A must-read! Excellently done.

The Warrior of Many Faces wrote:Ah, here we go!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_avGfOnSFJTrCTBRQAbSZD1PprEWj9yYCIbRzbWs3M/edit

Hmm, it's interesting, I suppose. Her abilities seem extremely complicated, though. And also, I wonder how Kirby-friendly your Neutral Special is. Other than that, it seems good. (Although, I'm not nearly enough into the Smash Bros. community to really get it. )
EDIT: Apparently, I didn't read the whole thing. Kirby gets her... Down Special? Does that have precedent? And isn't that the ability that doesn't do any damage?

AlicornPriest wrote:

The Warrior of Many Faces wrote:Ah, here we go!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1w_avGfOnSFJTrCTBRQAbSZD1PprEWj9yYCIbRzbWs3M/edit

Hmm, it's interesting, I suppose. Her abilities seem extremely complicated, though. And also, I wonder how Kirby-friendly your Neutral Special is. Other than that, it seems good. (Although, I'm not nearly enough into the Smash Bros. community to really get it. )
EDIT: Apparently, I didn't read the whole thing. Kirby gets her... Down Special? Does that have precedent? And isn't that the ability that doesn't do any damage?

The complicated thing is MYM's fault. 13 contests tends to make things get way more elaborate than Smash actually is. XD

Yes, there's precedent. In MYM at least. And yes it is, but even without a set specifically designed to work with concealment, anyone can benefit from smoke bombs. I suppose that without light hitboxes, Kirby might have difficulties, though. Hmm... Neutral won't work, Side seems like it would make the chaos bad enough to stop being fun... maybe I'll give Kirby the Up Special instead.

Thanks for the honest critique! This helps a lot.

I'm sorry I could've give you any comments more then what I've already did. Cause I've not got a clue what to say about it. Other then I enjoyed reading it. I can't tell it's good or bad cause I don't know enought about the system.

But If I gotta really give it some though to give, maybe you could've given a bit more info about what this whole MYM thingie is and what's well known about it.

Well, I'm still relatively new to MYM, so I tend not to think of differences until somepony notices them. I suppose that since Garble is from the most recent contest, you could try looking over that one to see what tends to make it in there... other than that, I can't think of anything that would help...