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Re: Character Sheets

Post  Ramsus on Sat Aug 17, 2013 4:53 pm

Yeah, it's Perception. Editing that into the sheet.
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Post  Sefton on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:11 pm

So, first things you shoudl know is that I can't D&D. At all. Never played it because of a lack of people to do that with me where I live. Second is that english is my second language so I probably fucked up on one or two rules there, but here it is, Featherplume, the Hero-to-be. If anyone can tell me if I forgot or did something really wrong I'd appreciate that a lot.
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Post  Xel Unknown on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:15 pm

Access Denied to see that page... Go hit that Blue Button on the page that says: Share, and then click the Everyone With the Link option that pops up.

And don't feel ashamed about this, it happens to EVERYONE now and then.
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Post  Sefton on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:22 pm

Xel Unknown wrote:Access Denied to see that page... Go hit that Blue Button on the page that says: Share, and then click the Everyone With the Link option that pops up.

And don't feel ashamed about this, it happens to EVERYONE now and then.
.....Corected, thanks.....I'll go feel ashamed nonetheless there on the corner now
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Post  Xel Unknown on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:30 pm

Well are you planning on sending this character into a Tabletop Pony Tales Game? Cause your Combat build was built with those and not the skype stuff...

Also I'd say you shouldn't worry about Density stuff until the character reaches level 4 unless you really wish to use that one...
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Post  Sefton on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:33 pm

Xel Unknown wrote:Well are you planning on sending this character into a Tabletop Pony Tales Game? Cause your Combat build was built with those and not the skype stuff...
I figured it'd be easier to try tabletop first before going into skype. Skype is the most common way to play around, then?

Xel Unknown wrote:Also I'd say you shouldn't worry about Density stuff until the character reaches level 4 unless you really wish to use that one...
Derp. I'll think about that, thanks
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Post  Xel Unknown on Sun Aug 18, 2013 7:36 pm

Yeah. The forum games mostly use the Skype System for Combat because it's easier to use for play by post. Other then that and some grammar issues the character seems solid. Not at the most powerful... But I think of that as a plus, given how many min-maxed builds there are getting made nowadays.

I do suggest you do spend your remaining 500 combat gold on something. Most games I see more use the "gold" system as basically just for combat and has no effect outside of combat so you aren't gaining anything by not spending it. And you can always trade out in most games I've seen as well.
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Post  Sefton on Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:26 pm

Okay, I remade the profile using Skype's standard. How's it now? I had to change some stuff
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Post  Mind Gamer on Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:36 pm

Must... Resist urge... To suggest Melisma as a rival to Featherplume... ...Nope, suggesting it. Don't know why.
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Post  Xel Unknown on Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:39 pm

Level one characters don't get any Combat Traits... Unless they buy the Training Items that gives them Traits...

Other then that, still a solid character sheet.
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Post  Sefton on Sun Aug 18, 2013 8:46 pm

Xel Unknown wrote:Level one characters don't get any Combat Traits... Unless they buy the Training Items that gives them Traits...

Other then that, still a solid character sheet.
Corrected, and thanks!

Must... Resist urge... To suggest Melisma as a rival to Featherplume... ...Nope, suggesting it. Don't know why.
If you want to roleplay sometime just gimme a poke and we see how those two get along xD I can't promise I'll know what I'm doing though.
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Post  Crystalite on Fri Dec 27, 2013 8:24 am

Soo, I made a new character, yay!

...The problem, is that I have no idea how to flavor the combat build I'm using. It's odd, I'm usually more creative than that; I'm guessing Christmas wore on me more than I thought...

Any suggestions?
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Post  Quietkal on Fri Dec 27, 2013 4:02 pm

Well, going with the dance-in-a-trance theme, I'd like suggest the following:
Trance - (no change)
Healing Salve - Soothing Sway
Prepare Spell - Add Another Spin
Thunderstorm - Leap like Lightning
Drain Blood - Add a Kick
Blood Pact - Odd Tempo
Take Life - Sickening Sway
Hyperbeam - And Lift and Throw!

They're far from perfect and please make changes if you're inclined, but they're a rough draft at least.
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Post  Crystalite on Fri Dec 27, 2013 6:24 pm

Hmmm. Yeeeeeesss.... that works quite nicely....
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Post  Loud Taffy on Mon Apr 28, 2014 3:39 pm

Hmm... don't know If I did this right. Could use some feedback. My character's name is 72
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Post  tygerburningbright on Mon Apr 28, 2014 6:37 pm

looks good over all just a few things you may want to consider. It may be a better idea to wait off writing a backstory until after you enter a game and get some information on what setting you are going to be in and more minorly that destiny you selected is one of the more commonly banned aspects of the system and destinies are well aspects of the character and how they grow it may be better to wait and see how your character develops first and then select.
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Post  Ivory Valor on Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:17 pm

I hate to be THAT GUY... but what's the difference between 'history' and 'background' on the character sheet?
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Post  TheCavalry on Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:23 pm

The background is your characters personal history; where they came from, what their life is like, etcetera.

I think "History" should be renamed, but I've seen it used as the non-magical theory booksmarts stat. So having a high history would be akin to having memorised lots of facts from books, reading, etc.
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Post  Ivory Valor on Thu Jun 26, 2014 7:26 pm

Okay. Thanks!
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Post  megaL3 on Fri Jul 25, 2014 4:24 pm

My first ever character, Mirrored Prism. Please tell me what you guys think!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XE-81IvJ8UlTuxkhDaY-axsO8HowY5eVDJ28e73foWg/edit

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Post  mjh6 on Fri Jul 25, 2014 4:30 pm

well, the first thing you need to do is change permissions on Google docs so we can see it.
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Post  megaL3 on Fri Jul 25, 2014 4:48 pm

Sorry about that. Should be right now.

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Post  Xel Unknown on Fri Jul 25, 2014 6:10 pm

First minor errors I noticed is that Your Knowledge is at 9 & Sense is at 6... But Arcana: +7 (should be +9) History*: +10 (should be +12) Heal: +7 (should be +9) & Perception: +8 (should be +6) Persuasion*: +11 (should be + 9) Streetwise: +8 (should be +6)

Unless you have typos on your Knowledge & Sense stats... And intended them to be at 7 & 8 respectively.

Also under combat you have both the Prepare Spell talent & the Spellbook Weapon... Those two do not work together, like at all... Spellbook basically makes Prepare Spell do nothing.


Other then these minor errors, seems like a solid character... If a bit odd seeing an unflavored Changeling Trickery on there...
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Post  megaL3 on Sat Jul 26, 2014 4:11 am

Okay, fixed the errors with the stats and swapped out the spellbook for a really sharp sword.Thanks for the help.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7jQnsPxTHapUXpFWEJxM0ZSNzA/edit?usp=sharing

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Post  Xel Unknown on Sat Jul 26, 2014 9:23 am

megaL3 wrote:Okay, fixed the errors with the stats and swapped out the spellbook for a really sharp sword.Thanks for the help.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B7jQnsPxTHapUXpFWEJxM0ZSNzA/edit?usp=sharing
Personally I would've swaped out Perepare Spell... But now you got a solid pony sheet for real-world gaming! (I assume it's real-world gaming cause of the file setting .docx you've got for the sheet.) Then again if it's meant for tabletop rules... You might wanna use the tabletop combat talents. Cause you've totally got the skype game system talents.

Also one major issue I see with your combat build... You have the Solider's Vest AND NO WAY TO GET TEMP-HP! That 500 Gold is being wasted unless there is some way to get you temp-hp!
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