YFTechno's Unofficial Printable Character Sheet

Hey there everyone! I am YFTechno with some lovely news! I been working on character sheets for this nice system. Currently it is a very plain sheet ( I am keeping it plain till I get some feedback from y'all so I know how to make it more effective and better use. I have a link down at the bottom for the pdf. Please give me any suggestions and what not you can!

Breakdown: 3 page sheet currently.
-Page 1: Basic character build, from your attributes and skill, even has a place to keep track of Magic Points, your element, and even your current amount of harmony
-Page 2: What I call the battle breakdown page, it has your health, your talents, and others!
-Page 3: This has a page for a picture of your pony, a background story, and even a inventory slot.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9805204/PonyTales%20Char%20Sheet.pdf

BTW: Once that I get done with a good 'working' version of this, I will probably start making printable GM Sheets for those GMs who have customizable screens.

All criticism is done with the intent of being constructive:

You can have 8 combat talents but you've only got spots for 6. The number can increase to 10 with the power of Combat Traits. Also, though a stylistic choice, Equestria's currency is bits, not gold.

Other than those, Formatting can be a bit of an issue. I'd say to centre all the "header" categories (like "vitals" and "boons"), so it doesn't look like they're data entry points. It glitched the first time I opened it, saying the font was weird, not sure if this is on your end or mine as an issue. I think a more bolded or underlined or more gothic font for the headers (especially the main one) would also be helpful.

Other than that, I think it's pretty nice. I've got a gdocs style template I use already, but something standardized has never hurt.

Destiny needs more slots, too. Give a title and, yaknow, room to describe destiny abilities.

I am working on the additions now, and will probably edit in my update in a hour or so.

@RavenscroftRaven: With the format, or really the placement of the headers of the section, I am more worried about getting everything condensed to a nice not taking 4 pages BEFORE I move onto doing the finer details (placement of text, and other smaller aspects that won't change the whole document). And when it comes to the font, I am using a Linux distro so some fonts that windows people have, I don't. I can select a couple of gothic fonts, but they don't look like some MS fonts. Lastly, when it comes to the issue with the opening, I believe it was on your side, since I was not have any problems with any of the other computers opening the pdf, so I don't know what to tell you there.

Bump. And also I finally posted a revised version. Again, I am getting this tested out, and will work on making them more appealing later, once I get both the right 'flow' for people to use these down, as well as a nice and effiecent placement I will make them look more pleasing to the eye (black on white text for headers or what have you).